Karen Freeman

Karen Freeman

Friday, 5 March 2010

Jumbo Jet

A class exercise. Write about something I know nothing about. This is from the perspective of a passenger on board a Boeing 747. I hope it is evocative of a passenger's feelings, that not knowing yet total trust in the plane and the pilots. I had queries in class about the use of the word stratosphere. For clarification here is a link to the names of the different layers of the atmosphere. http://www.windows.ucar.edu/tour/link=/earth/Atmosphere/layers.html

Under Review


Jumbo Jet


Announcements give time and speed
five hundred and sixty five miles an hour.
Thoughts meander
Queen Mary’s turning circle,
abilities of Mammoths to glide;
faith or science
push this hollow tube to the stratosphere.

Special entrance; in front, not for passengers
reinforced, code-locked, the office.
I sit.
Questions float in my head.
Point and go or constant tinkering?
Uniformed shadows understand
which button, pedals, that half wheel.

Look through polarised windows to the horizon
seated – rows face forward.

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