Karen Freeman

Karen Freeman

Tuesday, 23 March 2010

Taster One

This is a taster of a short story called Walking the dog.


Walking the dog

Julia picked up the lead, Comma, tail wagging sat against her calf, looking up eyes alight, tongue lolloping to the side.
‘Yes Comma, time for our daily constitutional. Which park shall we choose today?’
Attaching the lead to the dog’s collar Julia walked her to the car. The drive was uneventful with Comma running from window to window as she spotted landmarks telling her the park was close. The car parked in the nearly empty car-park, Comma was released to semi freedom. Immediately she charged over the banks into the trees winding her way back in a circle to Julia. A grin on her face Julia put on her walking shoes and picked up the lead. Comma took the rope in her mouth and tugged impatient to be off.
‘Ok Comma. Let’s walk.’
The two of them set off steady paced along the compacted chalk footpath. Comma shot off weaving between the trees, birds calling their warnings as the warm sunshine dappled her back. Julia smiled, life was good. Nothing could beat a walk in the woods with Comma, except, yes, the smile broadened, there was one addition that would make this brilliant. Julia and Comma passed a bunch of wild garlic, the smell wafted around them as Comma bounced through the undergrowth bruising leaves in her eagerness to explore.
Yes there is something, one thing better than a walk with Comma, Julia’s thoughts drifted in the warm breeze. That walk in the Cotswolds was full of wild garlic.
 

Tuesday, 16 March 2010

The End of the day

A clock strikes the hour
pink boots wait patient
above shiny dotty coats
hung from hooks.
Dap bags peep out.

Must weaves its way
through benches
damp mist hangs
in the air.
Silence permeated
then
obliterated
incessant jangle
the churble of thirty.

A shout from the corridor
‘stop messing about Tracey!’
Socked feet pleased
slip into pink boots.

The mop sweeps the floor.

Tuesday, 9 March 2010

No mobile phones take 1

No mobile phones

Tring Tring
‘I’m so sorry’
Keel haul
hang from the yard arm

Tring Tring
‘I’m so sorry’
Grumble rumbles
Hang draw and quarter

Doh Dah Dee
‘that’s not me’
Shudders of laughter
scatter the room

Monday, 8 March 2010

R&R

R&R

Flip-flopping day. Twists from slow to speed
goldilocks porridge printing money, library investigations.
Cold sunshine spins beams on a frost cleansed day
progress discussions challenge the mind.
Fried lunch wolfed at the table, coat and fleece at the ready
then run. March past Victorian tenements now
filled with student lets, the Press pounds to the left
old style shopping mall right. Thomas Hardy shines
past the popular co-op. Phoenix burns bright film.

Giggles and laughter, chocolates shared.
Daylight. Thomas Hardy beckons, gossip tease
beer and gin dispensed.

Saunter chat smiles in the late afternoon
until
arrival at the institution and work recommences.

Sunday, 7 March 2010

Birthday Tea Menu

Triangle sandwiches filled with cheese
egg and cress by their side
runny honey provided by the bees
and pungent strong vegemite.
Celery sticks and cucumber chunks
pickled onions and tomato too.
Pure healthy flapjack designed to dunk,
homemade rubbery toffee all set to chew.
Trifle layered with jelly, custard and cream
iced cookies and buns all served for your tea.
Fresh from the oven one final cake,
set with a candle for you to blow
tied round the middle, with its bright pink bow,
set around, party bags for your guests to take.

Saturday, 6 March 2010

Lost Property take 2


Lost Property

There, at the back, in the corner, behind
the screen, can you see it? Over there,
follow the sunbeams; be careful where you tread.
You’ll know it when you do see it, honest.
It arrived here long ago, delivered too soon.

Yes, that’s it. Serious, giggly child
full of wonder for the world
secure, safe, no doubts
lithe, clever. A little scared of her Mum
Daddy’s Angel. No doubts
skipping though perpetual sunshine.

Friday, 5 March 2010

Missed

Under Review


Missed

Vampirical bullets shot into the brain
shocked the grey matter
rattled the white cells.
Required: Vengeance.

Advert placed in shop window
‘Wanted: Retribution.’
Who will reply?
A slayer, handsome and tall, no
a werewolf gainsaid enemy, no
a priest, experienced exorcist, no.
Who will come?

Speedily snuffling the ground,
she stops, pounces, licks the face
paws on hips, hugging.
Hairy monster, not a dragon
smile bringer, hot water bottle.
She came, she replied.

Fanged adversaries left.

Jumbo Jet

A class exercise. Write about something I know nothing about. This is from the perspective of a passenger on board a Boeing 747. I hope it is evocative of a passenger's feelings, that not knowing yet total trust in the plane and the pilots. I had queries in class about the use of the word stratosphere. For clarification here is a link to the names of the different layers of the atmosphere. http://www.windows.ucar.edu/tour/link=/earth/Atmosphere/layers.html

Under Review


Jumbo Jet


Announcements give time and speed
five hundred and sixty five miles an hour.
Thoughts meander
Queen Mary’s turning circle,
abilities of Mammoths to glide;
faith or science
push this hollow tube to the stratosphere.

Special entrance; in front, not for passengers
reinforced, code-locked, the office.
I sit.
Questions float in my head.
Point and go or constant tinkering?
Uniformed shadows understand
which button, pedals, that half wheel.

Look through polarised windows to the horizon
seated – rows face forward.

Thursday, 4 March 2010

Observation take 2

Part of the end of term collection


Observation

Shadows of freedom, seen from the window,
dappled through leaves and grimy panes, flutters
of life glimpsed minutely, demonstrating
the facade that exists. Faded from view
joyful bubbles of laughter scrutinised.
Invisible screams trying to attract -
anyone. Watch people nod and walk by
they behold confidence blinded to
inner crises, aspects of doubt reflect
back shyly, prospects of hidden failure -
theirs. Aspects of lives carved cruelly blank.
Twenty first century creed never to see
pain in others; to perceive only through
rose glass, in bright stippled summer sunshine.

Night Watch v 9

Part of the end of term collection


Night Watch

Tonight I saw the sky darkly;
evening stars shone bright,
I saw the dawn
amazed at the sight.
Other stars became dim
memories of presence.
I saw the Moon transcend them.

Tonight with anger and despair
I watched the Moon
cherish bright children,
deaf blind to cries
shadowed stars, above.
Nurturing, feeding her protégés,
their nearness,
exhilarating vividness
deadening her senses.

Tonight tears welled in grieving eyes,
tonight I watched through orange haze,
polished platinum, dulled
distant, distinct radiance not quite viewed.

Tonight the gloaming hid destinies,
flaming mercury and sapphire obscured.
Mars and Venus, beware the veiled remote lights;
before they die, they explode with unparalleled clarity;
they consume in a moment earlier jewels
before they too become mere specks in the milky way.

Tonight the sky reflected a possible future
Tonight the radiance of those not yet seen
seared through the orange soup.
Tonight the sky showed me the present, what may be.
Tonight
the sky lived.

Jack in the Box take 4

Part of the end of term collection


Jack in the Box

It sits at the balance point.
A stonefish biding its time
tethered as clocks tick.

Stalactite secretes mote by mote
thicker year on year.

Blindsided
the tether peg kicked loose.
Slapped in the face by a shark
I spin without brakes.
It smiles and moves.

Eyes wide shut
visions fly
chaos butterflies
party in the belly.

In Camera take 3

Part of the end of term collection

In Camera

Ordinary monster thief of life sits
grotesque hunched stares at the screen
tap the mouse trap the image
tweak the picture.
Hear the children keen.
Toothed smile tongue flits.

Purloined pictures posted, sold.
Fantasy creations no human hand
touched skin, tasted lips
took advantage.
Observe the children stand.
Obsession grown cold.

Ordinary monster, merely a man
a nonentity, soft mundane
yet, contemptuous, egotistical.
Watched with amazement, he
denies harming, full of disdain.
judgement pronounced, processed and canned.

Know the horror take 4

Part of the end of term collection


Know the horror

Bound with rampant ivy, gagged,
hobbled, trussed arms and torso.
Viperous best friend’s husband
babysat my sons.
Hidden in clear view, a UXB
filled with noxious gasses
aloof, smiling with flitting tongue
he babysat my sons.

That mosquito babysat my sons
convicted of photographic malice,
purveyor of souls, causer of
malarial bouts of distress.
No repellent for the incessant whiner
unseen in the dark, not compared
with the ants nest of my past,
the babysitter of my sons.

hear the small voiced prayer of all mothers
‘please God, please let me be the only one to suffer.’

Exploding the Shark take 4

Part of the end of term collection


Exploding the Shark

Slapped in the face by a shark!

scalding mugs of tea sat circled,
enduring mystical medicine,
voices comfort, murmur, cajole
draw out long hidden grains
bound into rocks
thrown at mirrors.

Mirrored shards
 cascade into
minuscule reflections,
images of lies
of truths
of decisions made.

Ground into dust
caught in shadowy webs
swept up processed
catalogued.

The ocean offender penned
stuffed with the myriad of spidery secrets
fed with gelignite, dismissed to the sea
red button pressed.

The shark was exploded.

Exorcism take 9

Part of end of term collection

Exorcism

Islands mud–mired, debris.
Remember the hour
adulthood arrived.

Masked images stalk the screen,
an elf- haired orchestrator in sunshine.
Then childhood died.

He shadows her room
‘not a huge deal’
The sun hides
and adulthood arrives.

A word - a gesture,
it leaps back
a scalpel peels back scars
                                    childhood died.